I came out alone on my way to my tryst. But who is this that follows me in the silent dark ? I move aside to avoid his presence but I escape him not. He makes the dust rise from the earth with his swagger; he adds his loud voice to every word that I utter. He is my own little self, my lord, He knows no shame; but I am ashamed to come to thy door in his company. – (R.N. Tagore : Geetanjali)
मैं चल पड़ा अकेले मिलकर करने गुप्त इशारा वह है कौन तम में करता अनुसरण हमारा ।
सजग उपस्थिति से उसके बच हटता तनिक किनारे किन्तु नहीं उससे बच पाते हैं ये प्राण हमारे उठती रेणु धरणि से जब वह गर्वित चरण पधारा – वह है कौन तम में करता अनुसरण हमारा ।
धूल उड़ाते आ जाता है वह गर्वित गति जेता प्रति उच्चरित शब्द में मेरे निज गुरु स्वर भर देता वह मेरा स्वामी वह मेरी लघु निजता का पारा – वह है कौन तम में करता अनुसरण हमारा ।
मेरा अहं हमारा प्रभु ही बन कर साथ रहा है वह पंकिल संकोच रहित है उसमें लाज कहाँ है मैं लज्जित हूँ साथ उसे ले आने में गुरुद्वारा – वह है कौन तम में करता अनुसरण हमारा । -(पंकिल – मेर बाबूजी)
A blogger since 2008. A teacher since 2010, A father since 2010. Reading, Writing poetry, Listening Music completes me. Internet makes me ready. Trying to learn graphics, animation and video making to serve my needs.
इस अनुवाद को पढ़ ऐसा लगा जैसे कविता कहती हो कि 'वह प्रभु प्रभु ही तो नहीं है, उस ने छोड़ दिया है हमें अपनी इच्छा पर। वह हमारी चेतना ही है जो हर बार हमें रोकती है, कुछ भी गलत करने को। हम हैं कि उस की सुनते ही नहीं। हम पहचानते ही नहीं कि प्रभु सदैव हमारे साथ है'। सुंदर काव्यानुवाद।
bahut hi gahre bhavo se bhari kavita padhwane ka shukriya………ahnkar ko to chodna hi padega tabhi khud ko paya ja sakta hai.jo sabmein vyapt hai usse bachkar kahan jayege.
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इस अनुवाद को पढ़ ऐसा लगा जैसे कविता कहती हो कि 'वह प्रभु प्रभु ही तो नहीं है, उस ने छोड़ दिया है हमें अपनी इच्छा पर। वह हमारी चेतना ही है जो हर बार हमें रोकती है, कुछ भी गलत करने को। हम हैं कि उस की सुनते ही नहीं। हम पहचानते ही नहीं कि प्रभु सदैव हमारे साथ है'।
सुंदर काव्यानुवाद।
उस महाशक्ति की सर्वव्यापकता पर टैगोर के इस पद्यांश का उससे भी खूबसूरत और गेय भावानुवाद ! मन मुदित हुआ !
बेहतरीन एवं उम्दा भावनुवाद! आपका आभार इसे हम तक पहुँचाने का. आपकी प्रोफाइल देखी और सिद्ध पाया… आप सचमुच सेतु हैं. बधाई.
बहुत सुंदर.
रामराम.
Bahut Badhiya..Achchi prstuti..
badhayi himanshu ji..
वह है कौन तम में करता अनुसरण हमारा ।
परमेश्वर के सिवा और कौन..भावविभोर करने वाली प्रस्तुति..!!
bahut hi gahre bhavo se bhari kavita padhwane ka shukriya………ahnkar ko to chodna hi padega tabhi khud ko paya ja sakta hai.jo sabmein vyapt hai usse bachkar kahan jayege.
मस्त हिमांशु भाई आपकी लेखनी का आज एक और नया परिचय
भावानुवाद सुंदर है। बहुत बहुत बधाई।
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
punahsch (choonki ek baar pehle bhi kejh chooka hoon aur baar baar kahonga),
aapke pitaji ki lekhni ka kayal hoon….
aur hamesha ki tarah saman bhai se kuch likhne ki koshish….
"ह्रदय आह्लादित, जीवन अनुशाषित ,
कल्पतरु की पंखुडियों सा।
वेग नीर में, आनंद पीर में,
रोशन जीवन शंख दियों सा।
नश्वर पीड़ा, शान्ति अमर है,
अठखेलीयों में हिरणियों सा।
पुष्प सुगंधित, आशा जीवित,
प्रेम वृक्ष की नव कलियों सा।
निराकार की भक्ति करके,
हर्ष विगम्बित, हिमनदियों सा।"
bahi ko bhav padhein….
🙂
is anuvaad ko padh ke achcha laga…
काव्यात्मक मनोहर भावानुवाद.
अत्यधिक पसंद आया.
हार्दिक बधाई.
चन्द्र मोहन गुप्त
जयपुर
http://www.cmgupta.blogspot.com
गुरुद्वारा की तर्ज पर ही कहूँगा,
"सुन्दरानुवाद"
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